雅思大作文6分范文.doc

雅思大作文6分范文
篇一：名师：雅思图表作文6分范文实例解析
名师：雅思图表作文6分范文实例解析
在雅思索生中，普遍存在一种观点，认为小作文只占 1/3 的比重，而大作文占了 2/3 ，所以在复习的时候应当om 40% to 55% between 1990 to 2022 and it will keep increasing to 60% by 2022.
Overall, it seems the younger age people, the more going to cinema.(210 words)
【考官评语】
Band 6
This response addresses the requirements of the task and selects
relevant material to describe. Key features and an overview are presented, although clearer highlighting, more support and a more comprehensive overview would be needed to reach a higher band. Information is
well-organised and there is a clear overall progression in the response. There is some effective use of cohesive devices, but only limited use of reference


and substitution. The range of vocabulary is not wide, but it is adequate for the task. Control of word form and spelling is consistentlygood, although there are some clumsy noun phrases that indicatelimited flexibility. The candidate
attempts to use a mix of simple and complex sentences, but control is variable and grammatical errors or omissionsare quite intrusive at times. Figures are poorly integrated into sentences and indicate evident limitations.
篇二：雅思6分 大作文范文参考
? 批改By Will
本次批改严格根据ILETS大作文评分标准进展。ILETS大作文评分项：TR (论证扣题度), CC (连贯性及全都性