雅思大作文6分范文.docx

雅思大作文6分范文
篇一：名师：雅思图表作文6分范文实例解析
名师：雅思图表作文6分范文实例解析
在雅思考生中，普遍存在一种观点，认为小作文只占1/3的比重, 而大作文占了 2/3 ,所以在为家复习的时候应该以大习作为重，考试 的时候只要也应该先写大作文，而后再写小作文。但是在对考生实际 考分的观察中我们发现，往往窄小作文写得好的同学，作文的最高分 相对较高。之前有个基础班的女生，把时间都花在了小作文上，大作 文只写了个开头，但作文的总分居然拿到了 5分。
这是什么原因呢？因为大作文作文在短时间内提高极为有限，而 小作文却因套路很多，句式有限，在短时间内只要认真学习，就不难 提高。所以要特别提醒广大考生，尤其是时间非常十分轻率的考生， 千万不要忽视了小作文的学习！
以下提供服务的是一份6分与的曲线图作文范文，后附考官的评 语。同学们比对自己的文章，看下是否达到了 6分的标准？
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题目：
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below gives information about cinema attendancein Australia between 2021 and the present, with projections to 2021.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
【考生样文】
The graph shows percentages of cinema attendance at least once a year in Australia between 2021 to 2021 with projections for the future. The graph is described by 4 groups of different ages which are 14 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 49 and over 50 year olds.
The youngest age group people have been going to cinema more than any other age groups and the percentage has been keeping very high at
approximately90% since 2021. It is predicted to keep the high and to increase more from 2021.
The middle age groups people have enjoyed going cinema between 60% to 80%. The percentage of age 25 to 34 group has been higher tha